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she is an angel in disguise

 

i


She is never far, her paws ever in contact with my skin.
Within her eyes, I see fragments of mystique and age old wisdom,
pixels of light which speak of mysteries this world has yet to unravel.

 

 

ii


She loses her eyes with shuttered grace, until all I see 

is the deep forever of her silken fur, as soft as happiness.

 


iii


I sent her a subliminal whisper in the hope that she would hear me.
'Open your eyes, reveal to me that you will never be far, even in death.'
Her eyes flickered into life, afire with passion as she returned my steady gaze.
I looked at her and wordlessly I replied, 'I already knew.'

 


iv


I see her chasing the sunlight with graceful fluidity,

rising with the kiss of life ever sinuous and sublime.

She moves with the wind, jumps skyward with the ability

no wingless creature should be able to achieve.

 

 

v

 

She is ever near. Asleep I stir, to find the tickle of her whiskers
as she breathes me in. Asleep, I reach out to her until we are barely touching.
It is enough. We settle down once more, me into dreams whilst she sits,
beside me, my silent protector when I am at my most vulnerable.

 

 

vi

 

She is getting old, soon she will shed her earthly skin. I will fall asleep
missing her, and whilst asleep, I will stir as the bedclothes give way
to her familiar shape as she guards me, even in death.

My silent protector, you give me wings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt 1
For Jazzie, and because we are all connected.

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    September 11

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    This is such a sweet poem. I too know what it is like to lose a cat. I lost 3 of my 5 cats in a 11 month time span. I still miss my Hobbes, Casey and Shelby to this day. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest


  • lolagirl
    September 10

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    oh this is so very well written and sweet. Only problem is i don't knoow if i'm supposed to be guessing the animal, but it is so very well written I am in love with it. good luck in my contest


  • GuiltedShadow gold member
    September 7

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    This is beautiful. I've never thought of it that way. I've often found it creepy when I would feel someone staring at me only to open my eyes and find it was Peaches, my cat. I'll now feel a different way. She too is always right there when I go to sleep. Beautifully written.

  • aweee! This one was good. It was sad. thanks for entering and good luck!

  • Yemassee gold member
    August 28

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    I hope we're not all connected. There are people I want no relationship to.

    I know an old cat that will probably be reaching that point within a year or two, and it saddens me to know that.

    I had a dog years ago. I loved that thing almost as much as anyone and her death took a little out of me that I've never got back. I refuse to ever have another dog because the pain is just too great when the pass.

    So I do know the love you must have...and of course you have expressed it beautifully.

  • Judith Chandler
    August 24

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    They are protectors and maybe that could happen, the bedclothes taking her shape and so on.

    This really affected me; thank you for entering my contest.


  • thelamb01
    June 2
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    i like this poem. It's an interesting read. I give it a 9 out of 10

  • Aww, thats beautiful, Sis...

    A wonderful dedication to your delightful feline friend...
    They do make such awesome companions...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!

  • Himitsu
    May 30

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    Extraordinary delineation of your feline companion. Cats do seem to have a certain unearthly quality to them. I especially love your diction depicting your cat's eyes. Their fiery element is often hard to put into words. Thank you for your entry.

  • Love this from you and like the new pic too now I can see you

  • A Beautiful write "M", Like you my friend my animals are sacred to me , they are my reason to believe. All knowing and all loving....She is beautiful and looks just like our Perry the farm cat. Excellent...mal .


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 29
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    JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!

    This reaches out and touches the heart with warmth and love!

  • you know... you are the one who made me interested in learning about vignettes. no one can write them like the ones i read from your pen.

    pets are so wonderful, and when we had a dog, i used to talk to her with all my problems and woes... a perfect listener giving unconditional love.

    wonderful dedication to jazzie.


  • JinSays gold member
    May 29

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    I loves my kittycat. My best friend, she puts up with so much from me.
    This is a lovely tribute Mari, I know she liked it well enough, huh? LOL
    love to ya always,
    jin


    • Mariana gold member
      May 30
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      I asked her Jin...she just ignored me


      • JinSays gold member
        May 30
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        lol, dern kitties always have the fun, dont they?

        • Mariana gold member
          May 30
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          LOL...pesky ickle adorable fluff-balls. How come they always look so adorable and elegant. You know that guy who invented 'cat's eyes' that are seen in the middle of the road? He got the idea from seeing a cat's eyes at night. Imagine if the the cat had been walking backwards. He would have invented the pencil sharpener!

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