Why do you torment me
I have not thought about you in so long
and now you want to turn up and be friends
after what you did and without even a sorry
you want me to wipe the slate clean and let you close to me
I really don't think you understand what you did
So let me spell it out for you
you took a part of me and stepped on it
left me an empty husk
I have not had a thought about you in a year and some time
did not want to and right now still don't want to
I can forgive with and apology but I can not forget
The funny thing is I never got the apology
I was called an ass for not jumping up and down for you
and was told I was the one being a jerk
I am not the one that told someone that I loved them
then ran off with someone else and had a baby with them
you did then asked how I felt about it
What did you think you would get out of me
a that is great hope you and the new guy are happy
and I will always be your friend no matter what
How would you feel if I told you I love you then had a baby by another woman
then wanted you to be my best buddy think about that
you had told me that you were coming back here and we would be ok
I was wrong to trust you and I was hurt bad and now I am really just mad
I wish nothing on your kids that is just wrong
but until you make things right I am not your friend not even close
Author notes
Lol she said she was sorry a few days latter after reading this.
Please tell me what you think
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yeah
they always are sorry when we point out the mistakes but why in society does it take that great work
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Well, this strikes me as pretty much a generic jilted lover rant--nothing fresh or interesting to give it a new spin. As poetry it's flat, too--rhythmically prosaic, no interesting tropes, no engaging sonics. It probably had therapeutic merit for the writer, but I wouldn't expect most readers to get much out of it.
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I find the lack of puctuation a little jarring, though I understand that it is likely intentional in poetic style. A very intense personal rant
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This is very sad and deep. It has happened and they were mean to do so. I have many other words for "mean" but I don't want to use that vocabulary...
. Anyways, nice write and good luck with all that.
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this is deep and thought provoking...I think it might serve you better to swith out your background...it is hard to read the type through it...I'm afraid others may be unable to read it all or become disenchanted due to the difficulty...peace and light, Kep
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nice job. this piece is definatly relatable... i think everyones gotten burned by a friend. maybe not a severe but definatly felt hurt. i know i have. i did enjoy the piece. the fluidity was a bit hard for me to get and other then a few typos... it was awsome. nice write keep it up.
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Great Write.
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Heart Wrenching
My sweet Robin...there are no words that can make this right. (Except, perhaps, as you've pointed out here, "I'm sorry" would go a long way to helping you to heal.) I'll never understand the mentality of women of your generation that have the need to stay friends, even after this kind of a betrayal. (I can promise you...had this exact senario occured to the girl in question, she would be devestated!) I agree with Samplette...you MUST forgive her, whether you ever get an apoloy or not. It's the only way to free yourself! A wonderful piece, though I'm immensley sorry for the reason behind the write. Much love to you!
Paula
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really good job
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well done
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Infidelity hurts us because a part of us dies with the act. It takes us a while to be able to trust someone again. I completely understand your hurt and feel your reaction is justified. If you get back with this individual, he might take you for granted again. Once a cheat, always a cheat. So my advice to you would be to keep looking over your shoulder as far as this individual is concerned.
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WOW i know exactly what you mean, i have had this happen before and they made my blood boil just to hear them.
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It is hard to get over a pain of betral and distrust, or words of anger spoken. I feel like I have been here...for different reasons, but the pain is the same. Forgiveness doesn't make what the person did void, but it sets us free from a painful prison of sorts. When we forgive someone, it isn't always for them, it is for ourselves, or it should be.
I don't see how someone who has caused pain to another can try to go on like nothing happened. Myself, I go to them staight away, as soon as I know I said or did something wrong. Your frustration and anger is laced among your fogiving nature in this piece...at least for me. Seems like you have forgiven, but unless she seeks forgiveness she can't be a part of your life. At least you freed yourself.
Sam
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Oh My Word~
Aaaaaawwww I am sorry this happened Robin and I can imagine how upset You would be considering the situation~ I wish You nothing but Happiness and are able to find reconciliation in this matter Missed You Immensely!!! Glad t see You back
Thank You for sharing Your Heart
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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