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Let's Play a game

Let's Play a lil game
called Love

Ill call your name
Look into your eyes
And await the drop
On a horrid day

The one were you whisper good bye

Piss of shit why

Why would you play me like that
why would you fuck with me or my hearth

I wanna kill you
You heartless prick

Fuck you
Fuck your future
Fuck everything you stand for

You mean nothing to me

Your gonna im smilling
This broken hearth will heal
I just need to find a bandaid that fits
Drop dead.

As i find love remain lonley
And ill tell her every thing you put me threw
only an idiot clouded like i was would stay with you.
Thats once was me but not anymore sexy

what do you feel when you read it?

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  • What I get from this is, another break up. And like normal the girl takes it a little bad.

    It happens. There are many things worse.

  • wow

    What i get from this. Is it's about your past bf, your now ex. Sounds to me like he found himself another girl to manipulate, and you finally are starting to understand he never loved you, and through that your just screaming out how much you wish you'd never known him, and how he doesn't deserve you.

    And in the end your saying he may have broken your heart but he didn't take it. That your heart will heal and you WIll Find TRUE LOVE Brilliant i loved it good job