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Sunlight Caught in Crystal

In a hidden glade
In the secret haven
A waterfall tumbles down,
Its droplets sparkling like millions of tiny diamonds.
Rainbows are thrown here and there from the sun shining on the water,
Sunlight caught in crystal.
The teal blue water around the waterfall
Ripples with hundreds of colors.
And in the hidden glade
In the secret haven
A waterfall continues to tumble down.

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  • cupcakealia
    July 24
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    Beautifully written


  • Violinstrings silver member
    May 31

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    this is a good image , and feeling about the pic
    water as crystal what a wonderful idea
    droplets sparkling like diamonds
    water is so precious and certainly show it in this poem
    good luck in contest


  • penman gold member
    May 31
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.