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The Teenage Experience pt. 2

So moist
Everything heated
My best choice
Here with you, defeated

You tried to be gentle
So tender with love
I wouldn't have it
I wanted it rough

The air is so tense
Static with your touch
I feel my body clench
I know this is enough

Your eyes pierce mine
We feel so bottomless
there is no essence of time
You took it away with your kiss

You go deeper
My heart bursts
I can't help this fever,
This never-ending thirst

I love you
You love me
I know it'strue
Even if you leave

Because this isn't just sex
This is full of passion
This is when it's best
With you in moments of seduction

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  • chael
    May 29

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    I remember,,,,

    some where about a million heartbreaks ago. I was that age then, Great write, it took me back ....chael


  • higherlove
    May 29
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    this one is also realy good...keep it up!!