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The Teenage Experience

Your lips on my neck
Might drive me insane
I feel like I might wreck
It's intoxicating my brain

Slowly driving lower
My hearbeat
Pumping faster
Curling my feet

I grab at your hair
Claw at your skin
The fresh smell of blood
Such a sweet, sweet,sin

It's my first time
And oh, what a rush
Go further down the line
And it's just too much

I want more
I want you
I push you to the floor
Cuz this game's for two

Let me take control
Let ME show YOU
Your fingers fill this hole
My mouth knows what to do

We moan cries of sweet passion
We take it one step further
This urgent need is clashing
And time couldn't be slower.

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I'm trying SO hard to get this right. For some reason, I want to write erotica. Please tell me if I have improved! If it's bad, tell me that also!

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Comments


  • higherlove
    May 29
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    its a very good poem...good job


  • Ms Lez
    May 29
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    Beautuful passions....nicely communicated.
    It's a very interesting write.