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Seasons

When Summer dawns upon the sky,
There are few that it can't rival,
Green Grass that swathes the rolling Hills,
Signals Her arrival,

With the purest gold and fiery red,
The drowsey branches coated,
And to the longest Sleeping time,
Are now days devoted,

The fallen Trees of a Winter song,
Drop their leaves in sleep,
And for the long lost Summertime,
Do crimson Robins weep,

Is there anything more beautiful,
Than a Cherry Blossom in spring?
The way the Songbirds warble,
And the Mockingbirds do sing,

I can't imagine a better place,
That on our Earth right here,
Cuddled up amongst the Stars,
Like there's nothing we should fear,

Author notes

This was written about the beauty of nature

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  • forbidden-colour
    July 8

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    I love your authors notes, they are very humble. I really enjoyed reading this and it is nice to know that there are people intent on keeping the beauty of nature alive.
    Thank you for entering.
    Sophie

  • Abnormal
    June 28
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    Nice write. I especially enjoyed reading the first stanza. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Ami
    June 27

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    Great nature write Thanks for entering good luck

    (I liked the 3rd stanza the best )

    -♥Amy♥


  • Neha Sharma silver member
    June 17

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    Ah! I felt so good after reading your poem. This is a very lovely and beautiful verse. Thanks for participating in the contest. Good Luck
    -UG

  • trekkergirls bank
    June 9

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    nice. I liked the mention of the stars. Very good write you have here. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into this contest.


  • Antebellum
    June 3

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    I can't imagine a better place,
    That on our Earth right here,
    Cuddled up amongst the Stars,
    Like there's nothing we should fear.


    love the rhyme.
    The tone to this is so peacful...
    beautiful write.

  • charleypen
    June 2

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    Very Nice, Good Job

    I really enjoyed reading it. It had a nice rhythm and flow to it. I also like the way that you used aspects of nature to convey the different seasons.
    The only thing that I would say is that while I saw the references to Winter, Spring and Summer the reference to Fall escaped me.I'm thinking that the last four lines are your Fall section of the poem.
    Otherwise I enjoyed the poem and think you did a really good job, kepp up the good work

    • Legion.As.One
      June 2
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      Thanks for the kind words .
      Yeahp, you've pretty much got that right. The word fall: two meanings. Indicating the season after Summer and a 'fall from grace'. My last line is intended to suggest that we and our fantastic planet won't always be here.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 30

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    Oh well what a treasure
    we have here! Beautifully
    scribed concepts of nature
    and reality. Loved the
    visuals you offered and
    it was a very smooth read.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck

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