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My Daily Beat

I can't believe that I
Again drew the sidewalk patrol
Sometimes things don't run so smooth
Everything gets out of control

Usually it's a pretty good area
As I patrol the Downtown beat
I'm greeted with great respect
And the shopkeepers are very neat

As I pass the little coffee shop
John hands me coffee in a cup
Then when I get near the bakery
I smell the goodies baking up

By the end of my working day
I gather up all my little treasures
For many shopkeepers along my beat
Are priceless and that goes without measure

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  • Thank you for your entry in my contest. Best of luck


  • daviscth silver member
    May 29

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    Oh wow Katie! I love your response to this prompt. This is a delightful feel good poem and just perfect for the contest.

  • Well written with good flow to the rhyming verse and also a great take on the picture prompt--
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!

    • Thank you BuriedTreasures. Your kind comment on reading my poem is very much appreciated.

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