every student worries about
their grades,the homeowrk and tests
every young artist worries about
her paints,the brush on the palette
every young writer possibly has
a degree of frustration
every young cook,wants to
be that perfect chef
every young scientist
wants to discover everything
every young inventor
doesnt want anything the wrong way
the raging anger
the furious gleams
of when anyhting goes wrong
they know that
when they grow up
when hey know they'll be like
their mums,everthing wil be fine
everyhting will be alright
there wont be anything to worry about
no homework,no grades,no perfect sceneries
because a grown up doesnt have all that
right? everything is on
our young shoulders and minds
and ofcourse when we grow up
everything will be fine!
A contest entry
- Russian Nesting Dolls by ea.
1800 points, ended June 1, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whadya think
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AN ORIGINAL
Original my friend, a very good idea you have in this poem, well thaught out. Understanding this poem itself makes you worry lol. Well done . peace be with you.
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EXCELLENT POEM!!! I guess u have the poet taste in writing poems.
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Interesting connection between this write and the dolls who end up smiling when they are grown up.
Enjoyed your write.
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Good poem. Nice work, keep writing!
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hehehe, methinks this was written tongue in cheek by a very wise young person. I do think it does often all look great up here in adulthood from a young person's perspective - I remember not being able to wait to grow up. And yes, those pressures of youth are very hard to bear sometimes... Great answer to the mystery of the unhappy littlest Babushka doll. Well done and thank you!
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Terrific
You have thought this through, life seems to be
one big worry, we can only try to do our best
You have written a thoughtful poem good write
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