No one will know...
What you were thinking.
You put the gun to your head,
BOOM!
You were dead.
One quick shot,
In one final spot.
But you forgot us, you left behind.
Torn to pieces,
Unable to understand...
How could one so selfless,
Do something so selfish?
I'm trying to forgive,
Trying to let you go.
The damage you caused,
Perhaps time will heal.
Every time I think of you,
Wondering what I could have done.
What brought you to that darkening place,
That made you want to end your life?
So young... you had much to learn.
A promising future,
Why couldn't you give it a chance?
Author notes
Doing the option a time a friend attempted suicide and how i felt.
To all who read...
Suicide is no joke, and when one thinks of it they don't think of the effects the horror it brings to the one left behind. There is no peace to the death when one commits suicide it will always leave us a hole in our hearts, always asking the question why... it's the least likely of people who commits it too...
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hello
it expresses my feelings about my friends suicide thn -
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I am very sorry that you would have to go through such a tragedy.
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thnx
thnx for your sympathy now could you be tough (if need be) and tell me what you think of gaping wound my poem cheers
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maybe for some in constant pain and despair the only way to find peace is in death, and we calculate the suffering of those we leave behind against our own, and we know that our sufferng is greater. sadly for some suicide is the only way out..not the cowards way but the only way
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Yes I understand the thought of it I once came close to committing suicide myself. Some will say it is a cowardly thing to do but there are things with circumstances. Suicide will be a mystery that no one can understand. But if we all can think of just one person you would never want to leave behind or give them pain then i believe it can help that's what stopped me.
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