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Firefly



 

            The pretty little flapping winged firefly,
                gaze into her majestic eyes and feel the warmth of the sun.

            Intent and bold - strong and true,
                  with every movement you feel renewed.

            Reach out to touch, but not much,
                  for she is fragile - this is true!

              But if you ever see the firefly,
                  your life will be filled with a clue.

              The happiness approaches,
                  when her memory is within you.

              So sing the song of her embrace,
                  as she hugs the hope in your endless pace.

              There is no need to win the race,
                    always with you - in your lonely place.

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  • straighttalker gold member
    September 29

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    Excellent

    The picture you have painted here expresses something so difficult to express and you did it in a powerful way. I love this little poem - so seemingly simple and insignificant just like the little firefly, yet with inner eyes that truly made me feel "the warmth of the sun"! Please keep writing and becoming the master poet you were meant to be!