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"You did this to me."

I felt the love,
saw it in her eyes.
But for what truly belongs,
I have never cried.

I knew what was right,
saw it in every dream.
looked through every fight,
sealed all the seams.

I gave her my heart,
for her I sold my soul.
Now its tearing me apart,
I'm losing control.

I break down now,
soaked in fear.
I grab my razor,
just to stop the tears.

I went too far,
I cut too deep.
I can see you now,
as you begin to scream.

I whisper in your ear "You did this to me."

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This is the first thing i have posted on here in a long time. I hope it was worth the wait.
This is a true story just to answer that question.

Can you feel the hurt?

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  • HisFavoriteMistake
    May 29

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    Grady...

    Of course I can feel the hurt. If I recall a certain someone did the same to me. Well done though, powerful and true and raw emotion. I am so sorry you went through this and no matter what remember: I love you.