as the night clock
drums on slowly,
beats the rhythm of
snoring houses
(sated with
their own grandeur)
we will whisper
on a playground,
your breath curling
into my ear
like an endless
carousel song.
Author notes
for him
u n r a v e l e d
A contest entry
- pinwheels. by girl shaman.
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Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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this is one of the best pieces i have read all day
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shit! this is good!
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"him" whom ever he might be, is one fortunate man...to have these thoughts reserved for him. This piece is refreshingly beautiful. Your writing here is complete. Just gorgeous writing. Geo
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thank you!
this poem is for my boyfriend... i have actually written several poems for him, all with "for him" in the author's notes if you see them 
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