Never have I seen a creature so divine,
Though my eyes have traveled far and wide.
Oh, how I long to make you mine.
Such long, dark hair with such a shine.
About your beauty I have never lied!
Never have I seen a creature so divine.
Day after day I await a sign,
And always have I tried and tried.
Oh, how I long to make you mine.
My friends tire of hearing me whine,
Though you will never see that side.
Never have I seen a creature so divine.
Smiles so shy and features so fine.
To think this is after and I have died.
Oh, how I long to make you mine.
For years I've tried to draw the line,
Signs of my obsession to hide.
Never have I seen a creature so divine,
Oh, how I long to make you mine.
Author notes
I have a class with an amazing young lady, whom I have an odd fascination for. I just can't seem to get over her, even though it's been about two years.
I'm not in love with her, haha, I have a love already. I'm just rather taken with her.
Also, I KNOW HOW TO WRITE A VILLANELLE WTH. Yeah, these things are neat. Fun, too!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You have sculpted these words beautifully..
I see a stunning entity..
with almost angel qualities...
So beautiful and soft lass...
a memorible piece of art...
Bless you
little gypsy,
Liam
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I love it, your poetry reminds me of some of Sapho's poetry. Very passionate.
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