i spend time blind
groping in piercing darkness
with howling all around me
willing myself to melt the night
to walk out from under the stars
burning and blink into the suns
golden halo
yes let me leave behind this
tempestuous night filled with
mourning faces veiled, life
shrouded in despondancy and shame
i will embrace that azure expanse
infinetly exposed to his loving eye
brightly gazing
for i am a creature of the light
Comments
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The wording is excellent, very beautiful, gives a deep feeling of yearning.
Good write.
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The last light is great because it echoes that need to get away from the darkness, that which brings despondency. Some like to wallow in their sadness in their plight, but this poem suggests differently and that makes all the difference.
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beautiful, voice has a timeless classical quality. lovely.
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