Dear Diary,
Today I met the guy of my dreams
at the diner by my house
he smiled at me
flirted with me
kissed my fingertips
i felt my heart flutter
Dear Diary
Went back today
his friends were with him
they smiled friendly like at me
he came up to me
and led me to my seat
flirting with me
once again
my heart fluttered
Dear Diary
I talked to him outside work today
he asked me if i was single
I said yes
he smiled and left
im really happy to be writing to you
about this
Dear Diary
He asked me out
im so happy
we sat in the dark theater
he had his arm around me
holding my hand
he was also whispering every line the guy made
he saw the movie before
but it sounded so much better when he said it
Dear Diary
We made out for the first time today
he kissed me very gently.
His friends said he loves me
im so happy
im going to give myself to him
Dear Diary
I gave myself to him
every touch was gentle
every feel was cautious
every kiss was yummy
he showed his love to me
He is mine
Dear Diary
He broke up with me
I walked into the diner to say hi
and his friends laughed
he laughed at me also
saying i was nothing but a play toy
and that he only used me
to get what he wanted
he said im a slut
he said im nothing
i was used
I was raped
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I liked it but not as much as the first one... this one shows more hate in it i think... But other than that very emotional shows great perspective. Good read
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i love it and yet i hate that stuff like this happens
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it a nice one date rape isn't
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How sad is that? She gives herself to him & he turns on her. I saw it coming though when she decided to give the one best thing she had to give.
Thank you for sharing.
~~Shannon~~
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thank you.
There are so far only 4 in the series. But :]...its pretty popular.
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I do appoligise, and don't wanna sound grouchy or whatever but I don't like this one perhaps as much as the other two.
The definition of rape is: "forcing of somebody into sex: the crime of using force somebody to have sexual intercourse with somebody"
So therefore she'd be, yes used ... but not raped, considering it was consensual...
It's a touchy and difficult topic to write about if it hasn't happened but I dunno.
I do appoligize, I did like the other two -- just this ones a bit >.<
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Part 4 is out.
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It is fine. I understand, She is saying it cause it was her first time and he used her. Basiclly the ending leaves it ambicuous. [Whatever the word is]
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Yus I understand that,
and I do get the approach of it,
just not sure if the end flow works.
Sorry, I think i'm just being critical >.<
(Ish tired lol)
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Oh, I like this one also. Extermly sad. :/
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This is so sad...I cried. I'm so sorry that this happened to you.
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It hasent...its a series I am writing...
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oh sorry I was just going through the poem lists ^^;;
lol
wow then you're a really good writer because it was convincing! ^_^
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awww i hate heart break
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this pretty much happened with the first guy i ever let get that far... it broke my heart and for the longest time i was convinced that i was a whore. awesome write.
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this makes me think twice about trusting a guy. should any guy be trusted? hmm. good job
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Remember to keep an eye out for part 3, and once its created the fan group.
:}
Part 3 preview: WIll be about drug abuse. -
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Looking forward to it. = )
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... not exactly how it happened to me but an awesome write... being used and then to think it was love only to see it all crash down... yeah this is me great job bro
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awee bro
this reminds me of what happened to me only it was not that romantic.... -
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Its about rape you know that right?
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...I'm speechless with this one I am sorry...
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Its apart of a series I am writing.
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