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Courtesy

look i get It
you found a ~~~Boyfriend~~~
!!Congratulations!!
i'm happy, *Really*.
but this is why i Hate ►summer◄
no one {Calls}
no one [Talks]
no one pays any |Attention| to me
not that it's __New__ with you.
but i am ▲Sick▼ of it
i understand you have a ♪Life♪
separate from (Me)
and that you ♥Like♥ your boyfriend
but there's only so much that i can •Take•
if you don't --Want-- to talk to me
that's ☺Fine☺
just say the ♫Word♫
if you do, that's ☻Great☻
but i really don't give a ◙Shit◙
and don't «Feel» like i should
when you no longer give me the ♦Time♦ of day
when ░This░ is all over
and you two are no longer ▓Together▓
you will ├Call┤ me up
every night crying ╬Over╬ it
and you will ╫Expect╫ me to care
don't you ΩThinkΩ you should
extend the same ≈Courtesy≈?


Author notes

trying a new Style in my Writing. this person Knows i am talking to Her

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Comments

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  • I like this..... and i pretty much feel the same about someone we both know, though here idk who you're talking about..... anyway, great job - i like all the signs

  • Hey, thanks for the comment, it really does help..
    Ya, I haven't been on AP for a looong time, been pretty caught up with life.. but you kno, tough stuff and inner termoil (pardon my emo phrasology) can prompt writing when bottled up long enough..

    Would it be to prying to ask of the origin of this poem? It's ok if you don't wanna talk to me about it.. just wondered tho, seems like it's someone relatively important to you..

  • Yeah... I know that feeling...


  • A-Sky-Lark
    May 28
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    buah, screw them. I really hate when that happens.
    best of luck with it tho

  • HELL YES!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!! PUT IT INTO WORDS PERFECTLY!!! I hope if she reads this she realizes she's giving everyone she loves up for some guy.

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