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In Calypso Eyes

In the dawn of a gilded sun
The sacred orchard glistens
As trees embrace the morning
In augmenting delight

You are my muse
A beacon of exuberance
With porcelain skin and calypso eyes
You halt the jaded winds

The birds of prey would stop in their hunt
To bask in your pertinent aura

Skies dressed in azure
Hold the palest clouds
They loom overhead
The fortified oak
A spot where heaven spoke

While leaves rustle and animals scamper
We are caught in still life
My eyes trapped within your frame
Unfathomable enigma

In perfect embrace
The trees fold over us
And we are alone

In others ignorance
Bestowed, the secret grove
A home for you and I

Your beauty creates me
And none could define

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  • amazing... i think thats all that can be said. I really liked

    Your beauty creates me
    And none could define

    as well as

    My eyes trapped within your frame
    Unfathomable enigma

    Brilliant writing.
    Rose