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S.O.S

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S.O.S
Spit Or Swallow




Leading you over next to the wall
I kiss you gently on your moist lips
My hand travels down south
Feeling your manhood grow inside my palm



Standing with my legs opened wide
You kneel down on your knees
To munch on my juicy cunt
Lifting one leg over your shoulder



Grabbing the back of your head
Pulling you into me deeper in between my lips
As you flick your tongue back and forth
Over my flesh and hard clit



Wanting your king size dick
To be my pussy's crusader
You pick me up off the floor
As I wrap  my soft legs around your waist




Banging my swollen pussy vigorously
Massaging My wet sticky walls
Moaning loudly in my ear
Asking if I spit or swallow



My back hitting up against the wall
With each blistering stroke
My body starts to quiver
Culminating my big finale as I cum



Your carnal desires being satisfied
Sucking you off like an all day sucker
You ask again if I spit or swallow

I

Graciously

Swallow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I do not claim this picture used with this write as my own. Picture found on google images.

I would like to welcome Cuetip766 to allpoetry and I'm happy to be adding him to my allpoetry family.

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  • Amber Lee
    August 13
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    OMG!That was way tooo hot! I need to cool down lol.


  • Swtpoetryman
    June 13

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    SOS, indeed - and gives a new meaning to the morse code I learned in the Boy Scouts many, many moons, ago!






    Your carnal desires being satisfied
    Sucking you off like an all day sucker
    You ask again if I spit or swallow

    I

    Graciously

    Swallow


    And I had no doubt that you would - for why waste something so creamy and good - and I'm sure he gave you a nice deep kiss after just to taste a little of his own juices and yours mixed all together - a heavenly drink - to say the least! It's been awhile since I've enjoyed a fine piece such as this from you, Miss Hot Chocolate - which I hope to play with more of soon. Thanks SO MUCH for sharing.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

  • mcfreeman
    June 11
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    A Big Gulp....


  • Enrinye
    June 3
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    very good written, loved the erotic vibe and the image behind it...loved the explanation of S.O.S = Spit Or Swallow
    °
    My back hitting up against the wall
    With each blistering stroke
    My body starts to quiver
    Culminating my big finale as I cum
    °
    this part just did it for me...

    take care and good luck in the contest
    Suza

  • This was so erotic! I loved reading every word. The anticipation, the sensations and the imagery, was quite amazing. I do think you should enter this into my contest!! I would love to see it there. If you go to my page, it's my ACTIVE CONTEST.

    Whew! I can definitely say that you do have talent.
    Great job!


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    June 2
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    hey girl sorry so late but this was hot


  • Maxboy gold member
    May 30

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    Well you did it again girl, wow that was good.

    Very Nice Sweetie....Best wishes in the contest


  • mcope8050
    May 29

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    hahaha,,, WOW!!!,,,

    sos,,,
    Your carnal desires being satisfied
    Sucking you off like an all day sucker
    You ask again if I spit or swallow

    I

    Graciously

    Swallow



    ANOTHER FINE WRITE,,, thanks for sharing,,,,SOOOOOO much


  • Happy3
    May 29
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    Growing manhood in your palm...
    Wow. This is a wonderful desciption.
    An erotic read.


  • darell
    May 29

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    Amazing

    As always you deliver in full force.
    Your attention to detail is legendary.
    I am completely captivated by your
    imagery. Imagination like that is lost
    on the undeserving and ungrateful.
    Fabulous Funky and Fresh

  • Cuetip766
    May 29
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    WOW BOO IS ALL THAT FOR LIL OL' ME???


  • lonelyboy
    May 28
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    Damn!!!!!!!!11 wow im srry this was hott .... oh sorry good luck lol

  • mcfreeman
    May 28
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    up leg up on me.....


  • Desire gold member
    May 28

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    Holy Moly~

    Wowzers what a piece penned and I owe You some reads
    My eyeballs melted after reading this~ Geesh!
    What an adventure You took me on~
    Almost had internal combustion...
    HOT indeed Beautiful~
    Woot!

    Now off to the next one
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 28
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    perfect!

  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 28

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    Oh goodness!!!

    WOWWEE!! hot hot hottest!!! my tongue is dragging on the floor, as if the piece wasn't hot enough you had to KILL ME with the last lines?? DAMN..that was just cruel lady..
    exceptional!

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