The thought of fairies put me at my ease
their wings move gently in the breeze
fairies spread pixie dust with a wand
this could feel as soft as baby's skin
turning nightmares into dreams.
these dreams fills our minds with laughter
the thoughts of fairies becomes a treasure
where fairies live happily ever after.
this is worth more than a diamond
always the subject in a love story
and a butterfly not touched yet
but still adored as time goes by
Author notes
prompt 2
diamond, treasure, fairies,babys,butterfly,
at first I had the idea of fairies and angels together and the poem was to long so
I decided to write two different poems which is better
that is what is good about rules for a contest
my first poem was more than 25 lines and i did not want delete thoughts about fairies and angels
A contest entry
- MY 4TH FAIRIES CONTEST by Treasure 5.
1000 points, ended June 18, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All Fairy and Angel prewrites contests No 1st 2nd or 3rd place winners Fresh writes wanted now by Treasure 5.
750 points, ended July 18, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is such a beautiful poem, Good luck in the contest but you don't need it. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read
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This is reall good welldone! Love the imagery and the rhyme x x
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This is pretty good, I like the way you describe your fairies. Thank you for entering and it is always a pleasure to read you
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Very beautifully written, my friend. You did a wonderful job on this.
A little housekeeping though... on line 9 line should it be 'a diamond'? Good luck and keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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A beautiful innocent gentleness in this magic write dear poet truly imagic for tiny eyes
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A wonderful use of the word bank, and a terrific take on the fairy prompt. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest with this lovely poem.
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I really like this poem.It is beautiful and I really enjoyed reading this.Great job
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This is beautiful, great imagery and very enjoyable to read.
My only advice is to check your spelling and check out your alignment. ^_^ Great job good luck in the contest!
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