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Body Bag Road

There’s no way back—no going home,
you can’t escape from Body Bag Road.

You’ll see things you won’t believe,
once you’re here, you’ll never leave.

Ravening maggots writhing wild,
garbage bags, and bodies piled.

Long-dead addicts itching for a score,
they’ll have your blood and so much more.

If you’re sent here—you’re here to stay,
there’s no going back—you won’t escape.

Severed limbs and body parts
crawl the road after dark.

A place where only evil dwells,
a piece of earth eternally hell.

Homeless children with flesh askew
slow and steady come for you.

No way out—welcome home—
you belong to Body Bag Road.

Author notes

this is based on an actual road locals refer to as Body Bag Road. Not in a pleasant neighborhood--not the short cut you want to take in the dark.

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  • pkoirish
    July 7
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    there's no way back once you read this

    love it a piece of earth eternally hell...


  • tony1kanobee
    June 17

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    Cool! :D

    Wow! Sounds like a real ominous place, so ominous and foreboding it would take a doomsayer poet like you to drive the chilling fear down our spines. I will stay my distance!


    • sxyvxn3779
      June 23
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      muahahahahahaha.... my work here is done. lol. thanks for taking the time to read and comment! great seeing you around, tony!