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Our Ice Dance

Your the guitar, the stings
They make beautiful sounds
Your the the piano, the keys
The chilling yet scensative noise it brings

You are my Ice dance
My very own Danny Elfman
You Are My Melody
Which i sing and dance
And we can both shear them

You are the voice
high and low
You are the harp
This makes my heart best fast and slow

You are my ice dance
You are my snow
Your voice it make me shiver and glow
You are my edward
No matter how cold you scissors
I manage to hold them tight
And dance in the snow
All though the night

Because you are my ice dance
My very own danny elfamn
The music you bring though one kiss
Is the one kiss
That will remind me of this
You, the one, my very own Ice dance.

Author notes

this is for Dan smartt who i feel i have bcome very close to. your right dan... the ice dance is us all over. i love you to much to loose you

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  • dani girl
    May 28
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    wow . ^^

    amazing this is just wow georgia your such a good poet and my big sis love you porge >.<