On the edge looking over
All I see is a four-leaf clover
May be a sign of things to come
Should I jump or should I run
Should I laugh or should I cry
After I fall, where do I stand
When my heart is in your hand
And you've got it all
After I fall, where do I stand
When I've loved you all I can
My love for you is clear as the
Ocean breeze you feel
Your smiling face to me is real
A lie to me is fake
The happiness makes me shake
So I will become your angel
And let the heavens bring the answer
You're a move I want to make
You're a chance I want to take
You're the man I've always dreamed of
To the heavens from above
After I fall, where do I stand
After I've loved you all I can
I now stand tall
After I Fall.....
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This is one of the most amazing things I have ever see. Rhi you need to publish this if you don't it will be a sham that people won't beable to read such beautiful writing. This touched me its so amazing I give this, on a scale 1 to 10,a 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000.
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This is very very beautiful. A wonderful piece of writing here. Your passion and emotion really came through in this. Well done indeed.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Ok, this is gonna sound crazy, but I have to disagree with Bob. Of all of yours that I have read, I think this out shines all the others! There is something about this one, that says more than mere words, when you read it the way I believe you intended for it to be read. I love this one!
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Mom
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ok, well I feel there are a few minor adjustments that I would make to it, but overall its good. I don't feel its your best work yet, but I love your intentions!! As always, ur still awesome!
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