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My Body's Yours

Let my body be yours
And do with it as you please
Allow it to bring you pleasure
And meet all of your needs

My body's like a world
That needs to be discovered
Let your hands explore me
for I need to be uncovered

Think of me as you bed
holding you up at night
You can lay freely up on top of me
Under covers with no light

Let me be your bath tub
Holding you while your wet
Sit inside me and relax
Doze off and take a nap

Drift away into your dreams
Which'll revolve around me
Revolve around me loving you
With a passion true and free

Let our bodies come together as one
as we intertwine in harmony
Making magic as we knit into each other
Oh, the fun that there would be...

Author notes

I wrote this about me and my babe, but I'm not sure if I want him to read it. Please comment.

A contest entry

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Comments

  • painter09
    August 22
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    I like it, hehe.


  • Hebz
    June 20

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    whoo, this's was amazing

    Well Done!

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Hebz