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pathway

a thick techture
that half smile
going back to when..you were the only one noticing..
she was different..
yet again, the one i used to know
the one you pass in the hallway
as you look up at her..glowing eyes like fire blowing out.
only you, she would give that look to...
but yet, you finally walked away, with a grin on your face
& pride in your heart.
Even though, knowing, you lost her..
her..
trust
forgivness
apathy, at times..
her..
eyes, that beautiful glare..
..that walk.
her..
heart;.
as you think..
you, you bleed one last time.
going out, with the memories,
the shattered memories left behind in the pathway.

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I just wrote what came to mind at the time.
Sorry if you dont quite understand it.

Soooo...what do you think?

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  • jadeangyal
    May 28

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    that beautiful glare..
    This was a great line. Great story, and well told. Sometimes all you can do is walk away and smile.