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love assault

so this is what it must be, my eternity,this is what you promised me.

this droplet of unloved blood,slips out and starts to flood.

tears rolling down a soft face,falling randomly no pacific paces,they to cars in a chase.

blades cold sharp and gray,now her unforgiving destiny

to hide is what i must do,i can't stop thinking of you,you are the one i want the night threw

i know that to you love is still a joke ,but with out you i am broke.

you feel as if its all your fault,well it is its love assault,your my biggest fault.

i just can't stop i am a freak, all because of you my out looks so bleak.

what i did i did for you, what i did i was told to,what i did i did all because i love you.

i cut right thought my heart strings,i want t open my wings.

you say i am not right,you say it to try and start a fight,but i know my future is bright

why would i want to be anyone else but me, not another girl off of the t.v.






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  • same with this one, i eant to know how you can make such great poems up man im serisly jealouse

  • i love it

    i love this poem..and love you more and more each day