...&& every s i n g l e fucking morning
asphyxiated and apathetic.
>> who knew we would end up like t h i s <<
[Four Long Years] --gone xxx --but not forgotten xxx
&& now im feeling |SomeoneElse|
w h o
i s n t
y o u
&& is s a d l y
[off limits]
..but that's perfectly.fine--x with you..
&& dont tell me i'm wrong,
->Not Now. Not Ever.
as long as im s i n g l e && o f f l i m i t s
-to everyone- then you're h a p p y.
well h u n n y, i dont think that |works| for me.
Author notes
just ask.
Honestly?
Comments
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Nice last line. It really brought all your emotions together, and you couldn't have ended the poem better. Well done, keep it up.
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thank you <3
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well well now,
i like this write alot. and the format was actually beatiful.
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thank youu hun
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...&& every s i n g l e fucking morning
asphyxiated and apathetic.
I love that.
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thanks.
luff youu <3333
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This is a powerful piece. I really love the way it is written; the dirty pretty thing gives it texture and really stimulates the senses. It also sounds amazing, and is a very powerful poem. Good job. Keep up the good work. I especially adore how it ends. Damn straight!
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thanks so much, <3
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Love this!
My favorite lines:
[Four Long Years] --gone xxx --but not forgotten xxx
&& now im feeling |SomeoneElse|
This is a great dp. I love it.
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thankss babee =)
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you're welcome.
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i like this very, very much
I like the way you're saying that even though he's not with you anymore doesn't mean you can't live without him like he expects.
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graciass =]
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Reading this makes my headache worse. I think you need to focus on what you are saying, rather then how you are saying it. The way you are writing it kind of confuses me and throws me off.
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well babe, its called DP, and it written that way for a reason
=)
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Oh...
I think you painted this scene well.
Nicely scribbled.
Mark
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thanks darling.
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