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Useless

I'm useless
replaceable
breakable
broken
shattered.

I'm worthless
on the ground
in the mud
covered in blood
dead.

How could you ever
love me
hold me
hug me
even care?

I'm not sure
what to do anymore
I love you
I really do,
but sometimes I wonder,
Do you love me
the same as you used to?

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 28

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    wow...the pain in this is so easy to see that it almost hurt to read it. this is a really great poem. and im sorry if you really feel that way.


    • Hated.
      May 29
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      i did for a whiule. it was mainly about how i feel like im losing my fiance. but he reassured me that hes never leaving and for the last 2 lines "Do you love me
      the same as you used to? " he answered very amazingly. he said "no, i love you more and more everyday." so i dont have to worry anymore....