Our world has crumbled, the sky is dark.
Money and greed, the weapons, the wars.
The continuous fighting and the breaking of bonds.
Hides the true essence of our undying love.
But here is my call! My call to arms!
Defend all that is love and never give up.
Take a look at yourself and the world around.
Make some changes and do believe.
That we can make it better if we just try to see..
The difference within humanity!
Live and let live!
A contest entry
- Paint Words Into My Head by Velvet Rose Petals.
1000 points, ended June 14, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so true. I agree, there needs to be a change, people have to make a change in heart, otherwise there is going to be a tumble down to nothing, and there will be no life...
Rose -
that was a little too blunt for my tastes. i believe poetry takes mystery and subtlety, this simply sounded like the rantings of a fanatic. no offense intended. still, it was interesting to read. nonetheless, while i thankyou for entering my contest you failed to follow my rules, so i shall have to DQ you. my apologies
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