Dear Diary,
What did I do?
Those kids at school
Picked on me again
I really dont like them
Please help me
Dear Diary,
They threw rocks at me
They bit me
I told the teacher
but he laughed at me
what do I do
Dear Diary,
I hit one of them
the others ripped off my clothes
and emberassed me in front of everyone
I dont know what to do
Deary Diary,
I told my mom
My dad told me im a naughty girl
I cried in my rooms for hours
No one cares
I have no friends
Dear Diary
I finally had enough
I cut myself
I bled
the blood flowed into the sink
parents saw the cut
and laughed
calling me an emo girl
who doesnt desearve anyone
Dear Diary
I died today
I took the razor and slit my familys throat's
in their sleep
then i took that razor
and I cut myself open
and watched the blood flow
wonderfully
Im coming to see you now
See you soon
Love, Your greatest emo friend.
Author notes
Enjoy my first dear Diary poem.
What do you think of my poem?
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Very cute, in a demented sort of way. I loved it!
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Wow.. its sad emotional and very touching... It shows what some people do go through everyday but most never take the time to notice it. Very touching.. a great write
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this is really sad, but really really good. loved it.
thanks for the read.
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wow deep emotion its great
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Love it!!! Really did, it was dark and moody and so so so emo ... I loved it! A great write, mate, truly inspiring.
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There 3 others in the series so far :}...5th is coming soon.
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Thank you for sharing
I must say this is deeply sad. I like the style of it. You touched me for I have seen this from friend in the best. Great write.
~~Shannon~~
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touching...really touching...i'm going to have to read the reast
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Thank you :]
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<3 this is really good. It's really sad, and I've known people like this. :| You did a very good job on this. I think I'll have to read your other dear diary poems when you put them up(:. ;;;
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There are 3 currently up. Enjoy them :]...
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A very dark poem-in the last stanza, "I died today" might be better served further down, I like "I took the razor and slit my family throat's" right behind "Dear Diary", I'm not a teacher, but maybe, "I Died Today" might be your last line,enjoyed
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wow
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Very powerful series sis...
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kinda reminded me of myself... and stalking me O.o ok? do what you want.... but thats fuunny
good luck and great poem
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This is the first poem in a series about diffrent types of abuse and stuff :]
Next one is a girl crush one.
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wow, this is awesome. sad but really good
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oh wow this is amazing...so depressing but so good. its so sad to think of anyone ever having to go through this... great poem!
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You may use it on your page if you want. Give credit though
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=( Awe....I know the feeling of getting picked on I really do. It hard to deal with every day and having people laugh at you and not care I know the feeling all too well. My parents don't care either. I can relate all too well. >.< great write. It's an amazing diary poem! It's creative and full emotion and pain
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Add it to your page if you want
[it was written to be like those, rape poems u see on peoples page] -
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I know I have see them before on plenty of poets pages! I am a rape victim...I know the pain ...:/
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amazing...can i add it to my page?
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Go ahead. Im glad to see you noticed what kind of poem it was :] Give me credit though, and check newest one out.
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kk bro
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wow that one really touched me
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