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Backstabbed

girl
loves
boy

  boy
  loves
  girl

    boy
    gets
    bored

      he
      dumps
      her

    like
    a
    game

  so
  heart
  less

one
year
later

  girl
  hears
  news

    boy
    loves
    friend
   
      girl
      is
      sad

    bad
    friend
    bad

  whore
  bitch
  skank

girl
wants
boy

  boy
  is
  gone

    girl
    feels
    stabbed
 
      life
      goes
      on
   
   

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 28

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    this is written in a strange way but i still love it! it flows good and the story behind it is just so sad. i think a lot of people have been there....great poem!