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From the feet of frustration.

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i.

 

he ekes equations

from the corners of his eyes

and paints percentages

into margins of scream,

to assess against bodily balances

 

whilst his scales slip eastwards

and stress presses itself

to the inside of his

skin.

 

 

 

 

ii.

 

he breathes better theories

through a veneer

of nightly visitations

and ambles expeditions

atop the dimples

of his dilemmas...

 

only to over-compensate

with too much air.

 

 

 

 

iii.

 

his world is a grudge

that gambles with time,

rhyming his realities

with occasional indulgence...

 

yet his age is ascending

and his shoes shine with dust,

while his heart

keeps caressing a familiar tune.

 

 

 

 

iv.

 

his thrum is strength's rhythm--

 

his precision of thought,

that scrawls its insignia

inside cuticle's care

 

whilst practical problems

seek his surface--

 

to shriek

 

and nurture the need

of a serious side.

 

 

 

 

v.

 

his facade is firmly fixed,

to blanket the black

of an unfulfilled void

 

yet the miracles of his meanings

turn his burdens...

 

to gold.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • annother gold member
    June 13
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    Very cool write! Loved the imagery and the form. Best of luck.

  • ooh!

  • he ekes equations

    from the corners of his eyes

    and paints percentages

    into margins of scream,

    to assess against bodily balances


    whilst his scales slip eastwards

    and stress presses itself

    to the inside of his

    skin.





    Sounds like my physics teacher at school. He was not only a tall and heavy set fellow with a vegeance for a triangle, he was relentless in pursuit of driving his not so good teaching skill home. Not a bad fellow, but it was hard to wrap my head around his teaching style. Hate physics to this day because of him. sigh

    I like the way you wrote this piece. Right up my alley indeed.