I take it all
keep it locked up sharing only the small
details.
I run and hide so you dont see the tear
welling in my eye.
I tried once to get you to see
I need you, the love and a family.
You kept walking away
telling me you couldn't stay
I sat and wondered why you didn't love me
until I felt no more pain.
Then one day you came to me
and I lost all control.
I told you everything you never thought you would hear.
Some I meant and wanted to say for so long but others were just slipping out.
You tell me now you love
yeah right. You only love
yourself.
I wanted the love and all the good stuff before
now I just want to feel normal
I don't want to sit and cry or cringe everytime you walk by.
I want someone to tell me they love me and mean it not just say it out of sympathy.
You should have been here for me and if you really did love me then you would have been here before I began to lose control and before you thought you may have lost me forever.
Author notes
Option 5:
I know its not the best in the world and it definately don't rhyme but after the first couple of lines I just kind of let out some things that have been on my chest.
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Comments
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it was a very well descriptive, thoughtful, amazing work
you went through a simple melody
liked it alot
thanks for sharing 
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Awesome job. It is really good. Excellent. I love it. You put real emotion into it, and it made me even teary eyed. I'm looking for that real emotion. Thank you for entering.
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thanks.
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