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Bloody Bath

You ask yourself how does it feel.
But I get no response.
You wonder how could you have failed
so miserably to stop the blood.

You scream for help

but no one comes.

 

As your blood fills

the bath to the brim,

I laugh at you with hate

in my very eyes you gave me.

You begin to choke so

I slit your throat.

 

Waiting for you to die,

would be such a tease.

But when you are gone,

there is the reward.

The wait ends and the

tease comes to a sudden stop.

 

Now I remove your

empty vessel from the bath.

Prepare myself for my

BLOODY BATH.

 

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New but as always dark.

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Comments

  • I like dark writes and as dark writes go this one was well done. You have written very well here. Thank you for sharing this piece.

  • kray
    May 28
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    wow this poem is deep, dark, and scarry.....
    I liked it alot....