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Prompt: Write about one or all of the seven deadly sins, BUT I want you to have the sin talking to the virtue, and the virtue talking back - from Midnight-x-Rose.
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Oh my gosh I love this!!! Wow the rhyme and flow was absolutely perfect. You totally nailed this prompt! There is something wrong if you dont win Gold for this. Amazing job!


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a very well penned write, full of wondeful lines and a great rhyming scheme...loved the 'coverstaion' style between the sins and the virtues it made your poem lively and flowing...
take care
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oh gosh i loved the ending of this! it was just perfect. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Thankyou so much for your comment!

♥ Maria ♥
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Amazing write, enjoyed the read, the rythm, the rythme the intensity and the format, could not stop reading. Great one!!!!


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it was great
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Bravo!!! I loved it!!!
Is this poem published? If it's not it's a damn shame. I love the way you threw it down. -
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Thankyou so much for your lovely comment!

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Amazing, simply amazing... I cannot see how you didn't win the gold for this. The rhyme and flow was incredible, and I loved the ending, especially the symbolic pink font further showing the "in the middle" status. This is a poem that should be published, and congratulations on a well earned trophy.


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Thankyou so much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment!

♥ Maria ♥
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Wow!!! This is truly an amazing read. You hae a very unique and intriguing style, and a masterful way with words. A most enjoyable read, and congrats on a well deserved win!!!


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Thankyou so much for your lovely comment!

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Nicely done Maria! I really liked this. Your imagery is outstanding and I loved the personification. I had a prompt like this once, but it didn't turn out very well. I love how you were able to do this. The ending was catostrophically amazing. I really liked this. Great job and good on ya' for your shiny.
Josh

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Thankyou so much!!

(zomg, Josh gave clappies?! *dies*)
Maria
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Funny, sensual, sexy, hot, passionate and thought provoking, all fits into the categories of this piece. Well wrote. I love the 'angel' and 'devil' sides.
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Thankyou so much for your comment!

Maria
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I LOVE the layout, and I LOVE the sins vs virtues, you're just amazing!!!!
It works so well the way you've written it and it all fits in and well...
IT'S JUST SO FREAKING AWESOME

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YOU'RE SO FREAKING AWESOME.
Thankyou so much for your comment, my dear; it means a lot
Maria
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luv it amazing
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Thanks for your comment

Maria
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NP thanks for the poem blew my off my feet... so you mind if i print it off and put it with my fav poems?
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Of course not!!
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thanks you rock keep pening
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Damn girl. This made my mouth drop. It totally rocks all the way even the format kicks ass.
The only suggestion I might have is in the 1st part on line four you use the word "and" twice. Maybe take off one and just use a coma or something else. No biggie though.
I agree with what kray said. It's been awhile since I've read such a great poem like this one.
If it was my contest I would judge it now and give you the gold.

Kari

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Aaaand, it's done
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Thanks so much for your comment hun - I'll finish it before you give me gold, mkay?
Maria
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wow....this was a real good one
I haven't yet read a poem like this
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Thankyou so much for your comment!

Maria
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