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No More Novembers

There was a time when you kissed me
and I thought the world must stop spinning;
there was a time when you made love to me,
and I was so happy I started singing.
There was a time when you wanted me,
wanted me like no one ever had before;
there was a time when you held me -
but then you turned and walked out the door.

So there will be no more Novembers,
never again will you kiss me in the rain.
Oh, there will be no more Novembers,
never again will you whisper my name.
Whoa, there will be no more Novembers,
never again will I play the seduction game.
No, there will be no more Novembers,
never again will you kiss me in the rain.

There was a time when you hurt me
and I thought the world would have to end;
there was a time when you broke me
and took the love on which I'd come to depend.
There was a time when you left me
to face the heartbreak and the pain;
then there was a time when it dawned on me
that I would be able to love again.

So there will be no more Novembers,
never again will you kiss me in the rain.
Oh, there will be no more Novembers,
never again will you whisper my name.
Whoa, there will be no more Novembers,
never again will I play the seduction game.
No, there will be no more Novembers,
never again will you kiss me in the rain.

There was a time when I forgot all the pain -
without warning, I fell in love again...

So there may be another November,
somebody else might kiss me in the rain.
Oh, there may be another November,
somebody else might whisper my name.
Whoa, there may be another November,
Once again I might play the seduction game.
Yes, there will be another November,
and somebody else will kiss me in the rain...

Author notes

Option N.iii - write me a poem called 'No More Novembers'
Prompt from the beautiful Midnight-x-Rose.

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  • nobodys-girl
    July 2

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    this is so sad and reminds me of everyone who has hurt me.. great write though. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 4

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    This makes me think of Karl my ex a lot. He promised he'd always be there and he isn't now and he hates me and it's the other way aroudn, or at least it should be. Very strong and relatable to most. The way someone makes us feel so special and then can cut us down in the same breathe, in the same moment.

  • Volatile.
    May 30
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    Very nice Margie, I can really hear this as a song. Skillfully written, I'm impressed.
    =Katie.

  • Shereen
    May 29

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    Hi.I wanted to thank u for ur care & ur comment.& I wanna tell u that ur poem is lovely.Sad but lovely.
    keep up the good work.


  • individuality gold member
    May 28

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    A good song, ah love, when we lose it, it feels like we will never love again, and we often swear to ourselves that we shall not let anyone close again, but that time fades with time and we are eventually able to love once more. I wish you the best of luck in the contest you have entered.


  • Ami
    May 28

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    Wow this is like one of my favorites by you..
    I loved it The chorus made me think of my boyfriend
    Cause we started going out in November,
    And the rest reminded me of my ex
    "Without warning I fell in love again"
    I can really relate and I love this song
    You should record it put it on youtube and send me it I really wanna hear it sung!


    • DramaQueen469 gold member
      May 28
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      Aww thanks for your comment hun
      Heh, when I fix all my technological problems I'll record it

      Maria

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