My wife, my life
With her I’m complete
I am lost without her
No one can compete
My wife, my lover
Giving all she can
Love without strings
Making no demands
My wife, a mother
Her children she loves
Kindness and mercy
The heart of a dove
My wife, my companion
Through all of our years
Standing right beside me
Sharing love without fear
My wife, my comforter
So caring and dear
When life overwhelms
She wipes away tears
My wife, my soul mate
We’ve known since we met
We were meant to be
Looking back, no regrets
My wife, forever
Never shall we part
Until this life is over
We love with all our hearts
A contest entry
- "Anniversary" by rinzurajan.
700 points, ended July 6, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any suggestions and comments are welcome
Comments
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Bravo!!! A man with a big heart!!!
You have restored my faith in lasting relationships! well done!!!
Excellent read , I admire and respect you , Many More Years to come for you both!
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Thank you so very much. She is my saving grace and has been for 30 years.
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Beautiful ...
You can feel the truth here
To be loved like that is a blessing. Wish you many more years together. By the way I'm a romantic sap ! lol sorry
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What, no Trophy? This is outstanding. Hope it is true, and you not be grandstanding...
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No grandstanding, no lies here. She's a pure and true saint. She has put up with me for 28 years, she HAS to be a saint. I actually wrote this for her one morning before we left for work. I just figured what the heck, I'll put it in with the rest of my stuff here.
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thats a beautiful dedication...written with a lot of love and dedication...
good luck
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It is wonderful to read pieces like this. Such a beautiful expression of love.
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
When you know you've found the right person to travel with on life's journey you're not only very fortunate, you do whatever it takes to keep them safe and by your side.
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A beautiful and heartfelt tribute to the love of your life. I really liked how you described her and your life with her, and the way you show all the things she means to you. Yes, you are so lucky to have found your soul make - thank you for sharing your happiness!
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I hope you have given her a copy of this, I just spoke with a gentleman yesterday who is selling out of horses and he said much the samething . It was beautiful then as it is now he just lost her and he going back to reservation.
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This piece actually gave me chills. The good kind. It is so refreshing in these times to have a true love revealed. I am sure your wife feels as blessed as you do. I look forward to reading more of your work for I'm already liking what I've read thus far. Many blessing and many more good years I wish to you.
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This is truly beautiful! Sounds to me, like "true love" does exist, and it lives within you and your wife's hearts! That is great! I really love this one!!!
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