Thinking you were different
That true love was real
Mask of deception
Just a diversion
False sense to feel
Intentions not of love
But material gain
Pleasure and defame
Words wanted to hear
Nothing sincere
Deceiver of dreams
Destoyer of hope
Betrayer of faith
Slippery slope
Hopes have gone insane
Crawling back once again
Into deep despair
No way in which to repair
Deceiver of dreams
Destoyer of hope
Betrayer of faith
Slippery slope
Shattered dreams
Remnants only remain
Imbedded in the heart
Scars that tore us apart
Faith betrayed
Collapsed around
Your flames from hell abound
Greed feeds the need
Oblivious to your wrath
Deceiver of dreams
Destoyer of hope
Betrayer of faith
Slippery slope
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Wutz Luv
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WOW!! I likwe the mixture of hate and despair in this poem...thanxx for taking time to enter and good luck
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This poem has great rhythmic flow. Who the deceiver is seem to be left to the reader. I would say it's the ego. But, it's probably about a lover.
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