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Sad world

I...
am the only sane one
last living breathing feeling human left

the rest,
they move like lost ants
in a hurry to no destination
their faces blurred as if seen through smoke
all individual thought gone

I...
am running out of air
no time or space remains to change anything

the rest,
they rejoice in mediocrity
with rituals for all that is insignificant
their minds set to sameness
all  desire  for change lost

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