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Does he love me or like me?

Melodies comes along like concrete
As the sun’s warmth still lingers during nighttime
When the day continues and the love is gone
There feelings become a somewhat delusion
The pale moon seems to need a jacket
Let the darkness cover her like this moment I’m in
Does he love me or does he like me?
I’m lost into a thought where I thought
There would be someway to get out
Swimming in perpetuity where is earth?
Put me down to where peace is
And where there is the breathe of trees
As my sprit roams within the wind
Once again

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