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My future .. a letter I wrote to me

Five years ago I wrote a letter to me..
forgotten for years..time passes so quickly..
A letter deliverd unexpectingly to me..
I opened it frantically ..for it was from me!!

I opened this letter..I addressed to me..
not knowing what the heact ? why was I ?.. writing to me ?

I began to read.... this letter to me ?
years have passed.. you never thought could be?

you have lived another many years ..

as you continue to read.

You have lost many loved ones ..
sorrows hard to bare..
All your tears have dried..
live life as you know it.. so happy now!
your prayers and dreams were found.

Just remember you wrote this to you ..
never loose hope !!

you have concorde what you could not believe..
your prayers were answered..
in God you did believe.

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  • JinSays gold member
    June 22
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    thank you for your entry, I wish you all the best.
    Love,
    jin