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Who Waits?


What kind of man would wait for love?
A eight year wait on love
A love that was sure to die
Love that seemed to be as far
as the distances between them

What kind of man would watch his love be free without him?
Watching her be free as a bird, knowing he can't stop her

What kind of man would only wait for her?

The day she realized that she wanted him all these years, thinkng its to late

What kind of man would say "Its never to late, i love you"


A true love.

Finally the waiting is over.
What kind of man waits?

A Man in love.

First Poem, i've wrote in about two years. Hopefully the rust will go away.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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