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some one please

someone please
just show me you care
dont walk past me like im not even there

someone please
just love me
and
not for what you want me to be

someone please
just tell me im worth something
please dont treat me like im nothing

someone please
just show some respect
im not a dog with rabies i wont infect

some one please
just stay
dont just runaway

why wont you people just accept me the way i am. were all different in some way.
but if you would take time to look

then you wouldnt scream or shout any thing
cause what you would see is a fallen angel with broken wings

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yeah...so............yeah....

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  • Memmy-94
    September 19

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    Beatifully Penned ! :)

    This is anything but crappy !

    People dol ove and care for you i promise !

    you mean something to mant people !

    Peace.
    Hugs and Luv.
    Hope and Healing.
    xxXxx

  • xXx Dark Poet xXx
    June 20

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    this is awsome. its not crappy. it has emotion to it and i can understand the feeling of wanting someone to be there and tell me that im not worthless.