I kneel before the
altar of your body,
I give unto thee
the emptiness
of my heart
and with turbulent
sacraments to
this love of mine,
I offer you only my
lonely heart as penance,
and with your body
as my communion,
I receive you
completely.
© Sweeney
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i love the idea of you taking her and letting her fill the emptiness of your heart - completely.. that is so beautiful and i think you have captured a very sacred tone in this poem..
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*sigh*
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What sane woman wouldn't adore being loved such as this? Beautiful, dear Scribe. 
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wonderful use and continuity of metaphor here...beautiful in its sacredness.
~ Nicolette
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