I know you, who you are deep inside,
when you are scared and run and hide.
But it's time to take off your disguise,
open up, show those deep blue eyes.
No more hiding out behind your mask,
and letting memories pass you in a flash.
I'm right here, so please don't be afraid,
pick up the pieces when you're dismayed.
I know you real well, I know who you are,
you are more than words, my own little star.
A contest entry
- Already On My Favorites List by Ted E Bare.
400 points, ended October 17, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
be honest.
Comments
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I like the way you did this as it can be a dual meaning; person and the object in the sky. As I was reading, my mind kept going back and forth between the two while it had relevance to both. Superbly written! I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "Already On My Favorites."
Ted E
PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!
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this is stunning and scary. many hide behind the veil of uncertainty usually out of the fear of rejection nice work here velvets ..impressed
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