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That Purple Haze

Calling my name,
That purple haze.

Never have I before
but I have been wanting to go through that maze.

Perhaps it will help me sleep
and its effects are said to be faster than liquor.

Illegal, maybe but hey why not.
I broke up with you
so now i can do what I want.

That purple haze
is calling my name

floating into my face
    mouth
          lungs
              brain

s
  l
  e
    e
      p.

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