When he holds my hand
I feel so safe
When i go to finish
I hesitate
When i kiss his lips
I know its a sin
But all the while
I think of him
The other boy
Who has my heart
Who has my love
He has my soul
But all the while
I cant let go
Maybe i need
Some time to think
Before i rope them
Further in
Who is on my mind
Each day
Well its time pick
Or walk away
My head is minced
Im so confused
The time will come
When i have to choose
I hope my heart can take
The beating
Will i shed a tear
For the one
Ill be leaving
So hard when your hearts
In some much doubt
Well its now or never
Got to sort this out
Author notes
its hard to make the right decision some guys seem to want you more when they know your involved and the minute you make yourself available the chase becomes boring i hope you make the right choice for you and end up happy you might need to finish with both of them to find out what you want your head is fried at the minute you might make a wrong choice either way i hope you sort it all out
A contest entry
- Forbidden. Love. by Shantalina.
500 points, ended June 17, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
WHAT DO YOU THINK
Comments
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emotionally provoking
straight to the heart of the matter- ' will i cry for the one im leaving? will I love the one im staying with? or..should i be on my own? such emotional chaos your words evoke.. such choices and sorrow...I loved every word, i feel like my heart is minced never mind my head! fanastic write dear Evelyn. x
love to you always
RF
PS- thanks for the wonderful comment on my poem. I hope life is treating you well. take care
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amazing.
this was a really well-written poem.
the way you worded everything was really well thought out, and i could tell you put your heart and soul into this poem.
amazing write!
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Thank you for entering, and for your advice!
I really appreciate it.
<3
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