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Wet Kisses

My clothes drop
from my body
like beads
of persperation
as your fingers
glide
across my naked skin.
Nipples teased
by an amourous
tongue that
flicks over them
at furious speed.
Curious hands
follow
each dip,
each curve
and your
lustfull lips
stalk their
every move
further and
further
down
until
your eagerness
is welcomed
with groans
and a different take
of my own
wet kisses.

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  • lonelyboy
    June 3
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    Thos is really good ... good lucj in thd contes


  • Galaxy2
    May 27

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    Wow!

    What an erotica, honey!
    How beautiful start:
    'My clothes drop...'
    What a terrific end:
    'Until
    your eagerness
    is welcomed
    with groans
    and a different take
    of my own
    wet wet kisses.'
    You're highly provocative, sweet lady!
    Wet kisses all over you!
    Galaxy2