She laughs and jokes with her friends.
She plays sports with her teams.
She sings with her groups.
She seems happy.
Underneath is darkness.
Underneath is shame.
Underneath is hopelessness.
Underneath the mask.
Nobody bothers to look.
Nobody bothers to care.
Nobody bothers to wonder
What's behind this facade.
A contest entry
- Pre-Writes Only by tears.of.silence.
600 points, ended August 25, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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was this the poem that you were refering to? ya. interesting. I agree, white would be better. but the poem itself, it's good!
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Thank you!
and: happy now? I changed it to white.
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ahhh how cute
norbus
this is adorable
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i personally think this poem could be more powerful if it was not in pink handwriting but that is just me.
the pink adds a little girly touch that i find unnecessary
i think stark white would be more appropriate for the meaning of this particular poem.
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