Like the day joining with the night
I was a dark fairy in a frozen land
A constant place of night, no stars
No moon had shown down upon me.
My people lived in pure darkness,
Until I stumbled upon the light
Our enemy clan of Sun and Moon.
But he shown so bright, I smiled.
The first smile I had ever smiled
it was because of him, his smile
his eyes prettier than a crypt
Multi-colored aura drew me in.
Deeper, I had betrayed my dark,
dark ways and never ending night.
My people agreed to let me join
him in marriage to get rid of me.
But as they did so and came to
our beautiful scene with my pure,
pure white dress not stained,nor
dimmed with their decay, unclouded
They all started to smile a little bit
Even if they didn't want to admit
They loved the flowers, purple,
blue, pink, and the blades of grass.
They also were entranced with light
their enemy had become their Allie
My diamond ring gave off a golden ray
This is what combined day and night!
Our beautiful flowery wedding fled
into the sunset of the cornfields
as day changed to night for the first
time in our history, stars came out
And the moon showed all the love
Romance the dark clan had been missing
For all eternity they waited for this moment
Vivid, shady,Dusk, Dawn, when two became one.
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4 th picture!
A contest entry
- Dark Fantasy Picture Prompt. by Shadows Mistress.
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aw.........aw............. y do u have to be so good at riting i have to read everything of urs twice and start crying. lol
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What an interesting take on the picture! I love the way this is a story, progressing along. I enjoyed reading this!
K
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Thank you.
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A romantic tale of two souls emerging as one. I liked the idea behind this although I had hoped for more emotion. This was told more as a story, which I wasn't looking for. I was looking for raw emotion and creativity. It was told from a third person point of view and I think pieces like this are better from the first person perspective, because the feelings float more closer to the surface. A lovely write though nonetheless.
Thank you for your entry.
Shadows Mistress. x
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I thought it was in first person...o.o
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Opps sorry, yes it is told from first person, my bad, I apologise. I guess I wrote that because I thought there would have been more emotion with it being told from the first person point of view, but there wasn't. Still a lovely romantic tale of the dark ones.
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Spice boys!!! this is like a classic story, just the scenery, characters and everything, a happy ending one
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THANKS!
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It was great. Another movie in my head. I can see this and more . lol So now there is another story for my mind. Great job.
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